Monday, April 16, 2007

Autobiography draft1 (1~2)
In the year of 1989, I was born in a calm day as a first daughter in Chang family. My name is Chang Pi- Fang (張碧芳). I’m a seventeen-year-old girl living in Tainan County with my four family members, including father, mother, grandmother and sister. My father who is humorous enjoys speaking poor English with me. He wants me not to be afraid of making mistakes, for I can always learn something from them. My mom who is fond of reading teaches me how to tell right from wrong. My grandmother is the person who is highly respected on account of her wisdom and her attitude toward life. My sister giving me useful advice is like my friend. And I’m an industrious student studying in National Tainan Commercial Vocational Senior High School. Everyone plays a crucial role in our family. Not rich as we are, we lead a colorful life.


Among all my personalities, I think the most obvious one is frugal. I don’t feel like wasting anything that can be saved. Actually, I usually turn off the light of the stair in the school and insist on eating up all the food on my plate. I’m also willing to open my mind to new knowledge. On the contrary, being impetuous, I like to finish my work as soon as possible. And sometimes I even do things on impulse. By the way, I enjoy listening to English songs when I’m at leisure. And I would memorize the lyrics that I like. It really helps me loosen up my brain. Beside, I find I making progress in English listening and vocabulary size. When it comes to running, I’m second of none in my hometown. Therefore, during my participation in track and field, I got many trophies and received a lot of praises. Furthermore, my parents took pride in me as well. But the most significant things I learned was teamwork and some valuable experience.

7 comments:

Celia said...

妳讓我感到很慚愧,我只是來簽到的。

梁宜靜 said...

妳能不能不要這麼厲害~~感覺我離你很遠..你的文章真的以超過你現在所學的..給些秘訣吧!!

Ryuka(暐) said...

天吶你寫好多bbb
而且寫的很好>___<

Butterfly said...

1. My name is Chang Pi- Fang (張碧芳). 姓要放後面

2.My mom who is fond of reading teaches me how to tell right from wrong那個是說什麼事對還是錯

3.I don’t feel like wasting anything that can be saved.這句看不懂,而且like是介詞嗎

4.而且你沒有堅持把東西吃完,而是丟給我

5.I enjoy listening to English songs when I’m at leisure為什麼listening和English songs間要加to

6.I find I making progress in English listening and vocabulary size那個為什麼要用making我覺得用make就好了

7. But the most significant things I learned was teamwork and some valuable experience.
那個既然是最重要的那個things就不用s 了吧,而且應該不要was比較好,要不然可以說I learned the importance of teamwork and some valuable experience.

傻咩 said...

我只能說…我曾經來過…
不知道要挑什麼…

Butterfly said...

那個listen to English song應該沒錯啦

Tina said...

我來過ㄌ