Translation1 draft2
Choosing television programs carefully is important. Though television is the most crucial channel that offers information and entertainment, there are some disadvantages of it. Some programs filled with violence and lusts have bad influence on teenagers. Spending too much time watching TV does harm to eyesight as well. Hence, we are supposed to choose television programs which are beneficial to our body and mind. Most important of all, never be a couch potato.
Translation2 draft 2
On May 20th, A-mei showed up in inauguration of a President singing the national anthem. A-mei's voice stands out among the popular singers. People might not understand why she was so famous. In fact, her singing hobby could trace back to her childhood. Owing to her perseverance of singing, and with her hardworking, she was able to fulfill her dream. Even she faced the failure; she never chose to give up. No wonder her performances were always worth being praised by her audience.
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Translation 1 draft2
Choosing television programs carefully is important. Though television is the most crucial channel that offers information and entertainment, there are some disadvantages. Some programs filled with violence and lust have a bad influence on teenagers. Spending too much time watching TV does harm to eyesight as well. Hence, we are supposed to choose television programs which are beneficial to our body and mind. Most important of all, never be a couch potato.
Translation 2 draft 2
On May 20th, A-mei showed up in a new president's inauguration singing the national anthem. A-mei's voice stands out among the popular singers. People might not understand why she was so famous. In fact, her singing hobby could trace back to her childhood. Owing to her perseverance of singing and her hardworking, she was able to fulfill her dream. Even she faced the failure, she never chose to give up. No wonder her performances were always worth being praised by her audience.
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