An unforgettable experience draft2
Never will I trade this special memory for anything. It was six years ago that my partners and I took part in the national field and track competition lasting for five days in Tai Dong. Our first day was spent on bus admiring the beauty of Tai Dong-the breathtaking view. The magnificent mountains whose top were covered with fog was bordered by the streams. We were so stunned at the view that no one felt like talking the last leg of our trip. We broadened our horizons the next day. First, we encountered excellent competitors who became our friends later from various cities and learned how to perfect our skills. Second, we had the chance to see the pole jump with our own eyes. By the way, we even responded with warm applauses as they broke the record. Last, we experienced the night light of Tai Dong where was filled with surprises, including street entertainers and concerts. It was the third day that we lived up to our teacher’s expectation-we got number four in one race. And what was better, we went to a nice steak shop to celebrate it. At that moment, I heard my inner voice yell” Life doesn’t get much better than this.” Our trip ended with satisfaction after taking pictures the last day. This experience not only remains vivid in my mind but leaves a valuable memory that can never be erased.

An unforgettable experience draft 1
Never will I trade this special memory for anything. It was six years ago that my partners and I took part in the national field and track competition lasting for five days in Tai Dong. Our first day was spent on bus admiring the beauty of Tai Dong-the breathtaking view. The majestic mountains whose top were covered with fog was bordered by the streams. We were so stunned at the view that no one felt like talking the last leg of our trip. We broadened our horizons the next day. First, we encountered excellent competitors who became our friends later from various cities and learned how to perfect our skills. Second, we had the chance to see the pole jump with our own eyes. By the way, we even responded with warm applauses as they broke the record. Last, we experienced the night light of Tai Dong where was filled with surprises, including street entertainers and concerts. It was the third day that we lived up to our teacher’s expectation-we got number four in one race. And what is better, we went to an upscale steak shop to celebrate it. At that moment, I heard my inner voice yell” Life doesn’t get much better than this.” Our trip ended with satisfaction after taking pictures the last day. This experience not only remains vivid in my mind but leaves a valuable memory that can never be erased.