Translation 1
Choosing television programs carefully is important. Though televisions are the most crucial channels that offer information and entertainment, there are some disadvantages. Some programs filled with violence and lusts have bad influence on teenagers. Spending too much time watching TV does harm to eyesight as well. Hence, we are supposed to choose television programs which are beneficial to our body and mind. Most important of all, never be a couch potato.
Translation2
On May 20th, A-mei showed up in inauguration of a President singing the national anthem. A-mei's voice stands out among the popular singers. People might not understand why she was so famous. In fact, her singing habit could trace back to her childhood. Owing to her perseverance of singing, and with her hardworking, she was able to fulfill her dream. Even when she faced the failure, she never chose to give up. No wonder her performances were always worth being praised by her audience.
Wednesday, March 21, 2007
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7 comments:
1.Though televisions are the most crucial channels that offer information and entertainment, there are some disadvantages. 那個television不用加s要不然變電視機,還有那個there are應該可以自成一句,那個disadvantage後面可以加of television
2.People might not understand why she was so famous時態要一致
3.In fact, her singing habit could trace back to her childhood應該是hobby那個habit是習慣
4.Even when she faced the failure, she never chose to give up. 那個even跟when放一起怪怪的,我覺得when可以刪掉
我不知道要改什麼ㄟ..原諒我吧!!
用字都很有深度唷!!
我只是來證明我有來過...
寫的很好一ˇ一
恩~真不愧是阿嬤耶~
我真的不知道要寫什麼啦,只能說妳寫得真好
Some programs filled with
be filled with
she was so famous 因為famous是事實is會好點
ㄣ~~~我不知要寫什麼ㄟ....
我有來過了ㄛ!!
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