Friday, March 09, 2007

A threatening letter draft1
Jane, a single mother, lives with her lovely only son. They have lived happily since she received a blackmail. It indicated that if she didn't pay 1 million dollars the next day, her son would be in danger. Therefore, she turned to her best friend for help. She called Ted up and told him what she has come upon. They discussed on and on but couldn't come up with any good idea. And Jane was so worried that she wept sadly. At last, she decided to calm down and look on the bright site. As she tried to loosen up, she caught a glimpse of calendar showing April 1st. Soon she realized that she was tricked. Then, with a minute silence, she started to laugh loudly. Happy Fool's day, she thought.

9 comments:

Butterfly said...

1.look on the bright side打錯了

2.They have lived happily since she received a blackmail這句感覺怪怪的,我覺得是收到勒索信之後就很快樂的感覺

3.是我就不會大笑,應該會砍死那個出主意的人

Sally Sun said...

They have lived happily since she received a blackmail.
我會寫
they have lived happily until....

要是我我會徹死那個人

許雅婷 said...

look on the bright site的site打錯了,妳最近好像很常用這句

Samantha*霓∥ said...

look on the bright site
是side
這句最近大家都很常用

Ryuka(暐) said...

除了side應該沒有什麼錯誤
好連續劇的劇情!
你最近常看民視吼??

梁宜靜 said...

1..look on the bright site->side

好無言的ending = =..

Vivian said...

你的還滿有創意的~~~真的

Tina said...

They have lived happily "since"
until比較好吧!!
bright "site"-side

傻咩 said...

look on the bright "site"雖然大家都說過了,不過還是再打一次side^^