Computers draft 1
Computers are playing an important role in our daily life. With it, we can not only keep in contact with the current news but get the information on all subjects. Furthermore, it is capable of being used in all kinds of jobs, for instance, a weatherman can use the computer to predict the weather condition more precisely. And teacher can teach children living in a faraway region by “distance learning”. All in all, computer is the most influential invention of the twentieth century.
Personally, I have a liking for computers, for it benefits me deeply. Firstly, I am able to broaden my horizons by surfing the internet. Secondly, with the function of MSN can I keep in touch with our close friends and relatives that I haven’t met in a long period of time. Thirdly, in addition to using it on those things, it is also a wonderful tool for entertaining. For example, I would browse the net to kill time and read comics to loosen up myself. In conclusion, I won’t lead such a splendid life without it.
Wednesday, May 23, 2007
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with the function of MSN can I keep in touch with our close friends 這句怪怪的
Secondly, with the function of MSN can I keep in touch with our close friends
應該是I can 吧@@
歐,我來了!
我也覺得有點怪
但是用文法檢查沒有錯耶..
那句真的不順ㄟ...
那如果把can I 變成I can 呢?
會不會比較好!?
我來囉!
文法沒有錯ㄟ....
1.第一段後面的電腦用複數會比較一致
with the function of MSN can I keep in touch with our close friends.
感覺很怪,如果改"with the function of MSN , I can keep in touch with close friends"比較順一點。
看起來好像沒什麼錯…
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