Saturday, February 10, 2007

Tips for staying healthy draft1
Being healthy has become one of the most concerned topics nowadays.There are some tips for you to follow. First, get proper sleep everyday.Not sleeping as long as your body requires, you'll be not only worn out easily but short of energy. Besides,don't make it a rule to stay up late, for it will ruin your body. Second, in addition to having nutrient food, you should exercise regularly. It is benificial to your blood circulation. Third, be optimistic. In fact, mental fators play important roles in your body,too. There's a survey shows that people who is always in a good mood is likely to reduce aging and has fewer health problems. As a result, looking on the bright side all the time is the best policy. By the way ,try to loosen up as you're tired. Find a good way to release yourself. And never put too much stress on your own. A none-pressure condition can help your body to develop well. All in all, health is to human what water is to fish.

7 comments:

許雅婷 said...

妳寫好長喔,妳的結論更讚!

梁宜靜 said...

你的論點很好唷!!非常有道理呢!!超強滴!!

Tina said...

寫太好囉!!不知要改哪裡ㄟ

Butterfly said...

1.Not sleeping as long as your body requires, 請改通俗一點don't sleep too short as your body requires

2.Third, be optimistic我覺得being

3. In fact, mental fators play important roles in your body,我覺得play a important roles in ....

Butterfly said...

4.By the way ,try to loosen up as you're tired. 我不知道By the way 後面能不能用祈使句

Samantha*霓∥ said...

好有力的文章
拍拍手。ˇ。

傻咩 said...

benificial還有fators是什麼??
nowadays.There和everyday.Not和Besides,don't 和body,too還有way ,try有些沒控格有些控錯位子