Wednesday, January 10, 2007

Pollution draft1
We face many polluted problems as the technology developes,and among all the pollutions, I think air pollution triggers the most problems. Firstly,owing to car's exhausting gas, the acid rain is getting worse and worse. Secondly, certain part of materials of the air conditioners bring about holes in ozonosphere. Furthermore, that makes our environment become a greenhouse effect. Lastly, more and more diseases appear because we no longer have fresh air. Therefore, when we benefit from the convenient technology, we should also find a good way to protect our own environment.

6 comments:

Butterfly said...

我覺得不錯

Samantha*霓∥ said...

我根本不需要來...

Tina said...

唉.....又不知道要改哪裡ㄌ??

許雅婷 said...

哎呀!到底要寫什麼呢,只能說妳是環保小尖兵

梁宜靜 said...

大頭嬤~~我來了~~基本上呢!!
恩~~你寫的我覺得很好!結論也不錯!!.....給美麗又大方的大頭嬤

Sally Sun said...

我覺得你的Firstly Secondly用的不錯

bring about holes
bring about比較不常用我覺得cause較ok
其他都不錯