Wednesday, January 03, 2007

My bedroom draft1
My bedroom is small but comfortable. On entering my room,the most attractive thing you'll notice is the medium-sized sofa under the window on the left wall . Feeling tired,I usually sit on it to relax. On the opposite side of the sofa lies my desk where I spend most time on. My bathroom is in the right corner next to my desk. And my bed that I love the most is between the sofa and the desk. On the wall on the left and opposite to the bathroom is the balcony. It has a great view of the streets. The closet that is to the left of the door is in fron of the bed. The bookshelf that keeps my books and snacks is between the door and the closet. This is my small and sweet world.

7 comments:

梁宜靜 said...

On the wall on the left and opposite=>用兩個 on 好奇怪..還是..我不知道啦!
in fron of=> in front of
(好sweet的世界唷!)

Ryuka(暐) said...

Your room have the medium-sized sofa ?
Oh~ I am envy of you.

Ryuka(暐) said...

根據我照著你這篇文章畫圖出來的結果
"My bathroom is in the right corner next to my desk."
改成"next to the door"
比較好懂唷~

許雅婷 said...

真的不知道要改哪裡啦

Butterfly said...

還不錯啦不過我覺得可以想像一個房間然後東西寫多一點

Samantha*霓∥ said...

And my bed that I love the most ..
And也許可以用些其他的詞
The closet that is to the left of the door is in fron of
的front 打錯
(媽阿 好難挑)我以後可以不要來嗎?XD

Tina said...

不知道要改哪裡啦??