Sunday, December 31, 2006

An embarrassing experience draft 2
Never would I forget the day I fell down on the chair of the summer-house. About six years ago,as usual,I went to the nearby garden with my friends and my sister. Being naughty,we took a dog with us and decided to let her chase after us. We all enjoyed being chased after and thrilling feeling. But unfortunately,I had a bad idea as I tried to get rid of the dog. I climbed up the chair,seeing my friend was below and jumped down. I thought I would end up with having a graceful pose or hitting my friend. However,I was wrong completely,my nose was bleeding.

Of course,I was laughted at by my friends. How stupid I was. From then on,I sweared that I wouldn't do it again.

2 comments:

Sally Sun said...

文章很不錯 通順
因為使用到蠻加分數的分詞構句
Being naughty,we took a dog with us and decided to let her
倒裝句也倒的很好
有中級英檢的實力喲

Tina said...

ㄚ媽......你寫得真好!!我找不到可以改的ㄟ......